Repetition: Ntsuas qhov cuam tshuam thiab pom meej hauv kev sau ntawv

In kev sau ntawv, repetition ua ib lub tswv yim tseem ceeb, txhim khu kev nkag siab thiab txhawb cov ntsiab lus tseem ceeb. Txawm li cas los xij, nws qhov kev siv ntau dhau tuaj yeem ua rau rov ua dua, txiav qhov cuam tshuam ntawm koj txoj haujlwm. Kab lus no tshawb txog cov kab zoo, sib qhia cov lus qhia ntawm kev siv rov qab los txhim kho koj cov lus sib cav thaum ua kom koj cov ntawv sau tshiab thiab koom nrog. Nws muab cov lus qhia tswv yim rau kev txo qis hauv koj cov ntawv thiab cov kab lus, thaum tseem qhia txog yuav ua li cas rov hais dua cov tswv yim tuaj yeem qhia thiab qhia meej cov tswv yim nyuaj.

Cia peb kawm seb yuav ua li cas thiaj paub qhov txuj ci no, ua rau koj qhov kev sau ntawv zoo dua thiab muaj txiaj ntsig.

Txo qhov rov ua dua ntawm cov txheej txheem ntawm koj daim ntawv

Kev daws qhov nyuaj ntawm kev rov ua dua hauv kev sau ntawv hu rau kev xav kom zoo, tshwj xeeb tshaj yog thaum npaj koj daim ntawv. Tshooj lus no tshwj xeeb yog tsom rau kev teeb tsa koj cov ntsiab lus kom tsis txhob rov ua dua, lav txhua qhov sib txawv ua rau koj qhov kev tshawb fawb. Cia peb xav txog qee cov tswv yim zoo los ua kom koj cov ntawv sau muaj txiaj ntsig thiab cuam tshuam yam tsis tau poob rau hauv cov qauv rov ua dua:

• Originality nyob rau hauv txhua seem. Tsis txhob muab cov kab lus los yog kab lus hla mus rau ntau ntu. Cov ntsiab lus tshwj xeeb hauv txhua ntu ua rau tus nyeem ntawv nyiam nyob.
• Sib npaug rov hais dua thiab tshiab. Thaum nws muaj txiaj ntsig los rov mus saib cov tswv yim tseem ceeb rau kev pom meej, xyuas kom nws tsis tig mus rau hauv kev rov ua dua qub. Nrhiav qhov sib npaug uas pab kev nkag siab yam tsis muaj suab nrov dua.
• Vib this thiab cov txiaj ntsig - sib txawv tseem txuas nrog. Yog tias koj tau piav qhia koj cov txheej txheem hauv ib tshooj tshwj xeeb, tsis tas yuav sau lawv ntau hauv cov txiaj ntsig seem. Hloov chaw, tsom mus rau qhov tshwm sim, xa rov qab rau cov txheej txheem tsuas yog tias nws ntxiv qhov tseeb.
• Cov lus ceeb toom zoo tshaj qhov rov ua dua. Yog tias koj xav tias cov neeg nyeem yuav xav rov qab cov ntu ua ntej, siv cov lus qhia luv luv (piv txwv li, "Saib rov qab mus rau Tshooj 4 kom paub meej ntxiv"), tsis yog rov hais dua cov ntsiab lus.
• Cim cov ntawv rau txhua ntu. Xyuas kom txhua ntu muaj lub ntsiab lus sib txawv. Qhov no tsis tsuas yog pab tau yooj yim navigation tab sis kuj tiv thaiv monotony. Piv txwv li, yog tias koj muaj ntau lub ntsiab lus xaus, sib txawv lawv nrog cov npe tshwj xeeb xws li "Xaiv rau lub ntsiab lus X."
• Txheeb xyuas qhov cuam tshuam rau txhua ntu. Txhua feem ntawm koj daim ntawv yuav tsum sib sau ua ke nrog koj lub hauv paus thesis lossis cov lus nug tshawb fawb. Tsis txhob suav nrog cov ntaub ntawv uas tsis txhawb nqa koj lub hom phiaj tseem ceeb. Yog tias cov ntaub ntawv tsuas yog cuam tshuam me ntsis, txhim kho nws txoj kev sib txuas rau koj lub ntsiab lus los yog xav txog tshem nws.

Siv cov tswv yim no, koj tuaj yeem txo qhov rov ua dua, yog li txhim kho qhov pom tseeb thiab cuam tshuam ntawm koj txoj haujlwm kev kawm.

Tsis txhob hais lus-qib repetition

Kev sau ntawv zoo ntawm kab lus mus dhau qhov tsuas yog muab cov lus ua ke; nws xav tau kev xav txog kev tsim kho kom tsis txhob rov ua dua. Nov yog qhov koj tuaj yeem kho koj cov kab lus kom pom tseeb dua thiab cuam tshuam:

• Concise introductory clauses. Saib kom ntev kev taw qhia uas rov ua cov tswv yim yav dhau los. Cia lawv luv kom tus nyeem ntawv tsom ntsoov rau qhov tshiab koj tab tom nthuav tawm.
• Nyeem nrov kom rov ua dua. Qee zaum, nyeem koj cov ntawv nrov tuaj yeem qhia cov qauv rov qab uas koj yuav nco qab thaum nyeem ntsiag to.
• Cov lus hloov pauv sib txawv. Siv ntau yam ntawm cov lus hloov pauv ua kom yooj yim coj tus nyeem ntawv los ntawm ib lub tswv yim mus rau lwm qhov. Qhov no zam kev sib txuas monotonous ntawm koj cov kab lus.
• Kev ua pov thawj rau kev ua tiav. Tom qab siv cov txheej txheem no, siv a kev pab cuam proofreading tuaj yeem yog kauj ruam kawg nkaus. Peb lub platform muaj cov ntaub ntawv pov thawj zoo uas tuaj yeem ntes cov lus rov qab tsis meej thiab lwm yam kev sau ntawv tsis zoo. Los ntawm kev tshuaj xyuas koj daim ntawv nrog peb cov kev pabcuam siab heev, koj xyuas kom meej tias nws nyob twj ywm meej, meej, thiab muaj txiaj ntsig zoo, ua raws li koj cov lus xav.
• Ntau yam hauv kab lus qauv thiab ntev. Muab cov kab lus luv thiab ntev, thiab hloov lawv cov qauv. Qhov ntau yam no ua rau koj qhov kev sau ntawv muaj zog thiab koom nrog.
• Ceev faj siv lub npe. Ceev faj nrog cov lus; tsis txhob siv lawv tsis meej pem lossis rov ua dua. Piv txwv li, tsis txhob hais tias, "Nws hais rau nws txog nws txoj kev npaj," qhia meej tias leej twg yog leej twg: "John qhia Mike txog nws txoj kev npaj."
• Ua kom meej ntawm lub suab thiab lo lus rov ua dua. Tsis txhob rov hais cov suab zoo sib xws lossis cov lus nyob ze, zoo li hauv kab lus "Lub teeb ci ua rau pom kev zoo siab heev." Ib qho kev xaiv zoo dua yog "Lub teeb ci ntsa iab ua kom pom kev zoo nkauj, ua rau cov neeg saib xyuas zoo siab." Qhov kev hloov kho no zam cov suab rov qab thaum khaws cov kab lus lub ntsiab lus.
• Tshem tawm cov lus tsis txaus ntseeg. Cov kab lus uas tsis ntxiv cov ntaub ntawv tshiab yuav tsum raug tshem tawm. Piv txwv li, tsis txhob hais tias "khoom plig pub dawb," tsuas yog hais tias "khoom plig," raws li khoom plig pub dawb. Qhov no ua rau koj cov ntawv sau meej dua thiab ncaj qha.
• Tsis txhob hais qhov tseeb. Tsis txhob suav nrog cov ntaub ntawv uas twb tau nkag siab lawm, xws li hais tias "Kev taw qhia yuav qhia lub ntsiab lus."

Los ntawm kev koom nrog cov lus qhia no, koj cov kab lus yuav tsis tsuas yog ua kom pom tseeb thiab muaj txiaj ntsig zoo dua, tab sis kuj tsis muaj qhov tsis zoo ntawm kev sau ntawv rov ua dua.

Kev txheeb xyuas thaum rov hais dua yog siv tau hauv kev sau ntawv

Kev sau ntawv rov qab tsis yog qhov ua rau muaj kev phom sij. Qhov tseeb, thaum siv kom zoo, nws tuaj yeem pab ua kom pom tseeb thiab sib koom nrog cov neeg nyeem. Txawm li cas los xij, nws yog ib qho tseem ceeb kom xav tias yog tias txhua qhov rov ua dua yog qhov tsim nyog. Hauv qab no yog cov xwm txheej tseem ceeb uas rov ua dua tuaj yeem ua tau zoo:

• Highlighting lub hauv paus thesis. Hauv qhov xaus, rov ua koj li thesis tsab ntawv tuaj yeem txhawb nqa lub hom phiaj tseem ceeb ntawm koj daim ntawv.
• Ua raws li cov ntsiab lus tseem ceeb. Kev siv tib cov ntsiab lus rau cov ntsiab lus tseem ceeb lossis cov ntsiab lus thoob plaws hauv koj daim ntawv yuav pab kom pom tseeb.
• Highlighting cov ntsiab lus tseem ceeb. Cov qauv rov ua dua hauv kab lus lossis kab lus, thaum siv me ntsis, tuaj yeem ntxiv qhov tseem ceeb thiab ntxiv dag zog rau koj cov lus sib cav.

Cov piv txwv nto moo ntawm kev rov ua haujlwm zoo

• Martin Luther King Jr.'s "Kuv Muaj Npau Suav" Hais Lus. Nws rov siv "Kuv Muaj Npau Suav" qhia txog nws lub zeem muag rau kev sib luag thiab kev cai pej xeem.
• Winston Churchill's World War II hais lus. Nws qhov kev rov ua dua ntawm "Peb yuav tawm tsam" hauv ntau qhov xwm txheej tau sib koom kev txiav txim siab thiab ua kom muaj zog.
• Charles Dickens "Ib Zaj Dab Neeg ntawm Ob Lub Nroog". Cov kab lus qhib "Nws yog lub sijhawm zoo tshaj plaws, nws yog lub sijhawm phem tshaj, nws yog lub hnub nyoog ntawm kev txawj ntse, nws yog lub hnub nyoog ntawm kev ruam, nws yog lub sijhawm ntawm kev ntseeg, nws yog lub sijhawm ntawm kev tsis ntseeg, nws yog lub caij nyoog. Ntawm Lub Teeb, nws yog lub caij ntawm Kev Tsaus Ntuj, nws yog lub caij nplooj ntoo hlav ntawm kev cia siab, nws yog lub caij ntuj no ntawm kev poob siab ..." sib piv cov lus tawm tsam, teeb tsa lub suab rau cov ntawv tshiab thiab hais txog qhov duality ntawm lub sijhawm nws piav qhia.

Tus yuam sij rau kev siv rov ua dua yog kom ntseeg tau tias nws ua haujlwm rau lub hom phiaj hauv kev txhim kho koj qhov kev sau ntawv kom meej thiab cuam tshuam.

Cov txheej txheem rau kev rov ua haujlwm zoo hauv kev sau ntawv

Kev sau ntawv rov qab, thaum siv cleverly, tuaj yeem tig koj cov lus los ntawm qhov qub mus rau qhov tsis nco qab. Nqe lus kawg no tshawb txog ntau yam txheej txheem los siv rov ua haujlwm zoo, ua kom koj cov ntawv sau muaj txiaj ntsig thiab muaj txiaj ntsig. Nov yog qee txoj hauv kev tseem ceeb:

• Lub hom phiaj tseem ceeb. Kev siv cov lus los yog cov kab lus muaj tswv yim tuaj yeem hais txog qhov taw tes lossis lub ntsiab lus. Txoj hauv kev no muaj txiaj ntsig zoo hauv kev hais txog cov lus sib cav tseem ceeb lossis cov tswv yim. Piv txwv li, hais txog cov ntsiab lus tseem ceeb hauv kab lus qhib thiab kaw cov kab lus tuaj yeem txhawb nqa nws qhov tseem ceeb.
• Rhythmic sau. Tsim ib lub suab zoo txhim kho kev nyeem ntawv thiab ntws ntawm koj cov lus hais. Qhov zoo, feem ntau pom hauv paj huam, kuj tseem siv tau rau lwm hom kev sau ntawv. Cov kab lus sib txawv, qhov ntev, lossis lub suab tuaj yeem tsim qhov sib dhos uas txhawb cov neeg nyeem thiab ua kom nkag siab yooj yim.
• Cov ntawv nyeem. Kev siv cov tswv yim xws li anaphora (rov ua dua qhov pib ntawm kab lus txuas ntxiv) lossis epistrophe (rov ua qhov kawg ntawm cov kab lus txuas ntxiv) tuaj yeem ntxiv lub zog rau koj kev sau ntawv. Cov txheej txheem no txhawb kev sib koom ua ke thiab kev sib koom ua ke thiab tuaj yeem qhia txog lub ntsiab lus tseem ceeb. Martin Luther King Jr.'s "Kuv Muaj Npau Suav" hais lus yog ib qho piv txwv zoo, ntawm kev siv anaphora kom muaj zog.
• Sib tov repetition nrog ntau yam. Txawm hais tias lub tswv yim muaj zog, nws tseem ceeb heev kom sib npaug cov ntsiab lus rov qab nrog ntau hom lus thiab qauv. Kev sib xyaw ua ke ntawm kab lus, kev xaiv lo lus, thiab kab lus ntev tuaj yeem txhawb nqa kev nyiam nyeem ntawv. Lub hom phiaj yog siv cov txheej txheem no rau lub hwj chim, tsis txhob cia nws ua tsis tsim nyog lossis monotonous.

Cov piv txwv ntawm kev rov ua dua

• Hauv kev sau ntawv. Rov hais dua ib qho kev hu rau kev nqis tes ua ntawm cov ntsiab lus muaj tswv yim tuaj yeem txhawb nqa qhov kev xav ntawm kev sib cav.
• Hauv kev sau ntawv. Kev rov ua dua tuaj yeem siv los txhawb qhov chaw tshwj xeeb lossis chaw teeb tsa, maj mam ceeb toom tus nyeem ntawv ntawm ib puag ncig lossis lub siab xav.
• Hauv kev sau ntawv. Kev siv cov ntsiab lus tshwj xeeb thoob plaws hauv ib daim ntawv tuaj yeem pab ua kom pom tseeb thiab ua kom pom tseeb, tshwj xeeb tshaj yog thaum cuam tshuam nrog cov ntsiab lus nyuaj.

Kev siv rov ua kom zoo yuav muaj qhov sib npaug me me. Nws tsis yog hais txog kev rov hais dua cov lus xwb, tab sis ua li ntawd nrog lub hom phiaj - kom nthuav dav, tsim kom muaj suab sib dhos, lossis txhim kho kev sib raug zoo. Los ntawm kev paub txog cov txheej txheem no, koj tuaj yeem txhawb koj cov ntawv sau, ua rau nws tsis yog cov ntaub ntawv tab sis kuj tseem nco tau thiab koom nrog. Nco ntsoov, lub hom phiaj yog siv qhov rov ua dua los ua lub tswv yim kom pom tseeb thiab ua kom pom tseeb, tsis yog kev poob qis vim tsis muaj ntau yam lossis muaj tswv yim.

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