Uphindaphindo: Ukulinganisa impembelelo kunye nokucaca ngokubhaliweyo

In ukubhala kwezemfundo, uphindaphindo lusebenza njengesicwangciso esibalulekileyo, esomeleza ukuqonda kunye nokubethelela imiba ephambili. Nangona kunjalo, ukusetyenziswa kwayo ngokugqithiseleyo kunokukhokelela ekugqithiseni, ukunciphisa impembelelo yomsebenzi wakho. Eli nqaku liphonononga umgca olungileyo, ukwabelana ngeengcebiso malunga nokusebenzisa uphindaphindo ukuphucula ingxoxo yakho ngelixa ugcina ukubhala kwakho kutsha kwaye kubandakanyeka. Inikezela ngeengcebiso ezisebenzayo zokunciphisa ukuphindaphinda kwiphepha lakho kunye nezivakalisi, ngelixa libonisa indlela ukuphindaphinda okucwangcisiweyo kunokugqamisa kwaye kucacise iingcamango ezinzima.

Makhe sihlolisise indlela yokuphatha esi buchule, ukwenza ukubhala kwakho kusebenze ngakumbi kwaye kube nefuthe.

Ukunciphisa ukuphindaphinda kwinqanaba lesakhiwo sephepha lakho

Ukuphatha ubunzima bokuphindaphinda ekubhaleni kwezifundo kufuna indlela ecingisisiweyo, ngakumbi xa ulungiselela iphepha lakho. Eli candelo lijolise ngokukodwa kwindlela yokucwangcisa umxholo wakho ukuze ugweme ukuphindaphinda, ukuqinisekisa ukuba inxalenye nganye inegalelo elicacileyo kwithisisi yakho. Makhe sijonge kwiindlela ezisebenzayo zokugcina ukubhala kwakho kubandakanyeka kwaye kunempembelelo ngaphandle kokuwela kwiipateni eziphindaphindayo:

• Imvelaphi kwicandelo ngalinye. Kuphephe ukuphinda-phinda izivakalisi okanye imihlathi kumacandelo ahlukeneyo. Umxholo oyingqayizivele kwinxalenye nganye ugcina umdla womfundi uphila.
• Ukulinganisa ukuhlaziywa kunye nokutsha. Ngelixa kuluncedo ukuphinda ujonge iimbono eziphambili ukuze zicace, qiniseka ukuba ayijiki ibe luphindaphindo olungenasiphelo. Funa ulungelelwano olunceda ukuqonda ngaphandle kwesandi esiphindaphindayo.
• Indlela kunye neziphumo - ezahlukeneyo kodwa ziqhagamshelwe. Ukuba uchaze iindlela zakho kwisahluko esithile, akukho mfuneko yokuba uzishwankathele ngokubanzi kwicandelo leziphumo. Endaweni yoko, gxila kwiziphumo, ubhekisa emva kwindlela yokusebenza kuphela ukuba yongeza ingcaciso.
• Izikhumbuzo ezisebenzayo ngokuphindaphinda. Ukuba ucinga ukuba abafundi banokufuna ukukhumbula amacandelo angaphambili, sebenzisa iimbekiselo ezimfutshane (umzekelo, “Buyela emva kwiSahluko 4 ukuze ufumane iinkcukacha ezingakumbi”), kunokuphinda umxholo.
• eyodwa zihloko kwicandelo ngalinye. Qinisekisa ukuba icandelo ngalinye linesihloko esahlukileyo. Oku akuncedi kuphela kuhambo olulula kodwa kunqanda i-monotony. Umzekelo, ukuba unamacandelo amaninzi okuqukumbela, wahlule ngezihloko ezithile ezifana “nesiphelo kwisihloko X.”
• Ukujonga ukufaneleka kwecandelo ngalinye. Inxalenye nganye yephepha lakho kufuneka idibane nethisisi yakho esembindini okanye umbuzo wophando. Kuphephe ukuquka ulwazi olungaxhasi ngokuthe ngqo injongo yakho ephambili. Ukuba ulwazi lubonakala lunxulumene kancinci kuphela, phucula unxibelelwano lwayo neyakho Sihloko okanye cinga ukuyisusa.

Ukusebenzisa ezi zicwangciso, unokunciphisa ngokufanelekileyo ukuphindaphinda, ngaloo ndlela uphucula ukucaca kunye nefuthe lomsebenzi wakho wezemfundo.

Ukuphepha ukuphindaphinda kwinqanaba lesivakalisi

Ukubhala ngempumelelo kwinqanaba lesivakalisi kudlulela ngaphaya kokudibanisa amagama; ifuna ukwakhiwa okucingisisiweyo ukuphepha ukuphindaphinda okungeyomfuneko. Nantsi indlela onokuzicoca ngayo izivakalisi zakho ukuze zicace ngakumbi kunye nefuthe:

• Amagatya entshayelelo ashwankathele. Qaphela ixesha elide izingeniso eziphinda iingcamango zangaphambili. Zigcine zimfutshane ukuze ugcine umfundi egxile kwingongoma entsha oyithethayo.
• Funda ngokuvakalayo ukuze uphindaphinde. Ngamanye amaxesha, ukufunda iphepha lakho ngokuvakalayo kunokubonisa iipateni eziphindaphindayo onokuthi uziphose xa ufunda ngokuthe cwaka.
• Amagama ahlukeneyo enguqu. Sebenzisa uluhlu lwe amabinzana enguqu ukukhokela umfundi ngokutyibilikayo ukusuka kwenye ingcamango ukuya kwelandelayo. Oku kuthintela unxibelelwano olungenasiphelo phakathi kwezivakalisi zakho.
• Ukuqinisekisa ukugqibelela. Emva kokusebenzisa ezi ndlela, sebenzisa a inkonzo yokuhlola iimpazamo inokuba linyathelo lokugqibela elibalaseleyo. Iqonga lethu libonelela ngovavanyo olubanzi olunokuthi lubambe uphindaphindo olufihlakeleyo kunye neminye imigibe eqhelekileyo yokubhala. Ngokuphonononga iphepha lakho kunye nenkonzo yethu ephezulu, uyaqinisekisa ukuba lihlala licacile, lifutshane, kwaye linempembelelo, lihambelana ngokugqibeleleyo nomyalezo owucelileyo.
• Ukwahluka kwesakhiwo sezivakalisi nobude. Xuba izivakalisi ezifutshane nezide, uze utshintshe isakhiwo sazo. Olu hlobo lugcina ukubhala kwakho kunamandla kwaye kunomdla.
• Ukusebenzisa isimelabizo ngononophelo. Lumka ngezimelabizo; kuphephe ukuzisebenzisa ngendlela engaqondakaliyo okanye ngokuphindaphindiweyo. Ngokomzekelo, kunokuba uthi, “Umxelele ngecebo lakhe,” cacisa ukuba ngubani: “UJohn waxelela uMike ngecebo lakhe.”
• Khipha kwisandi kunye nophindaphindo lwegama. Kuphephe ukuphindaphinda izandi okanye amagama afanayo ngokulandelelanayo, njengakwibinzana elithi “Ukukhanya okuqaqambileyo kwenze ukuba kube mnandi ukubona.” Enye indlela engcono inokuba “Ukukhanya okuqaqambileyo kwandisa umbono omhle, ukonwabisa ababukeli.” Olu hlaziyo luphepha izandi eziphindaphindwayo ngelixa ligcina intsingiselo yesivakalisi.
• Susa amabinzana angafunekiyo. Amabinzana angafaki ulwazi olutsha kufuneka asuswe. Ngokomzekelo, endaweni yokuthi “isipho sesisa,” vele uthi “isipho,” njengoko izipho zisimahla. Oku kugcina ukubhala kwakho kukufutshane kwaye kuthe ngqo.
• Kuphephe ukuthetha izinto ezicacileyo. Kuphephe ukuquka inkcazelo esele iqondwa, njengokuthi “Intshayelelo iya kutshayelela umxholo.”

Ngokubandakanya ezi zikhokelo, izivakalisi zakho aziyi kucaca kuphela kwaye zibandakanye ngakumbi kodwa zikhululekile kwimigibe eqhelekileyo yokuphindaphinda ukubhala.

Ukuchonga xa uphinda-phindo lusebenza ngokubhaliweyo

Ukuphindaphinda akuyongozi ngokwemvelo ekubhaleni. Enyanisweni, xa isetyenziswe ngobulumko, inokunceda kakhulu ekucaciseni nasekubandakanyeni umfundi. Nangona kunjalo, kubalulekile ukuziva ukuba into nganye ephindaphindwayo iyimfuneko. Ngezantsi ziimeko eziphambili apho uphindaphindo lunokusebenza:

• Ukuqaqambisa ithisisi esembindini. Ekugqibeleni, ukuphinda yakho Isiteyithimenti sethesis inokubethelela eyona njongo yephepha lakho.
• Ukugcina ukuhambelana nemigaqo engundoqo. Ukusebenzisa amagama afanayo kwiikhonsepthi ezibalulekileyo okanye imixholo kulo lonke iphepha lakho kunceda ukugcina ukucaca.
• Ukubalaselisa iingongoma eziziintloko. Izakhiwo eziphindaphindwayo kwizivakalisi okanye kwimihlathi, xa zisetyenziswe ngokuphakathi, zinokongeza ugxininiso kwaye zomeleze ingxoxo yakho.

Imizekelo eyaziwayo yokuphindaphinda okusebenzayo

• UMartin Luther King Jr. "Ndinephupha" Intetho. Ukusetyenziswa kwakhe ngokuphindaphindiweyo "Ndinephupha" kwagxininisa umbono wakhe wokulingana kunye namalungelo oluntu.
• Iintetho zikaWinston Churchill zeMfazwe Yehlabathi II. Ukuphindaphinda kwakhe "Siza kulwa" kwiimeko ezahlukeneyo ngokufanelekileyo ukwabelana nokuzimisela kunye nokomelela.
• UCharles Dickens "Ibali lezixeko ezibini". Imigca yokuvula “Yayingawona maxesha alungileyo, yayingawona maxesha amabi, yayilixesha lobulumko, yayilixesha lobudenge, yayilixesha lokukholelwa, yayilixesha lokungakholwa, yayilixesha lonyaka. yokuKhanya, yayilixesha lobumnyama, yayiyintwasahlobo yethemba, yayibubusika bokuphelelwa lithemba…” ngokuchaseneyo amazwe aphikisanayo, ebeka ithoni yenoveli kwaye eqaqambisa ubunye bexesha elichazayo.

Isitshixo sokusebenzisa uphindaphindo kukuqinisekisa ukuba kufeza injongo ekuphuculeni ukucaca kokubhala kwakho kunye nefuthe.

Ubuchule bokuphindaphinda okusebenzayo ekubhaleni

Ukuphindaphinda ngokubhaliweyo, xa kusetyenziswe ngobuchule, kunokuguqula i-prose yakho ukusuka kwisiqhelo ukuya kungenakulibaleka. Eli candelo lokugqibela liphonononga iindlela ezahlukeneyo zokusebenzisa uphindaphindo ngokufanelekileyo, ukuqinisekisa ukuba ukubhala kwakho kuyabandakanya kwaye kunefuthe. Nazi ezinye iindlela eziphambili:

• Ugxininiso olunenjongo. Ukusebenzisa amagama okanye amabinzana ngobuchule kunokugxininisa ingongoma okanye umxholo. Le ndlela isebenzayo ekuqaqambiseni iingxoxo okanye iingcamango ezibalulekileyo. Ngokomzekelo, ukucaphula ibinzana eliphambili kwizivakalisi zokuvula nokuvala isiqendu kunokonyusa ukubaluleka kwalo.
• Ubhalo olunesingqisho. Ukudala isingqisho kuphucula ukufundeka kunye nokuhamba kweprozi yakho. Olu phawu, oludla ngokufumaneka kwimibongo, lukwasebenza nakwezinye iindlela zokubhala. Ukwahluka kwezakhiwo zezivakalisi, ubude, okanye izandi kunokuvelisa isingqisho esitsala abafundi nesenze lula ukuqonda.
• Izixhobo zoncwadi. Ukusebenzisa iindlela ezifana ne-anaphora (ukuphinda isiqalo sezivakalisi ezilandelelanayo) okanye i-epistrophe (ukuphinda isiphelo sezivakalisi ezilandelelanayo) kunokongeza amandla ekubhaleni kwakho. Ezi ndlela zikhuthaza umanyano kunye nokuhambelana kwaye zinokuzisa into ephawulekayo. Intetho kaMartin Luther King Jr. "Ndinephupha" ngumzekelo obalaseleyo, wokusebenzisa i-anaphora kwimpembelelo enamandla.
• Ukudibanisa ukuphindaphinda kunye neentlobo ezahlukeneyo. Nangona isicwangciso esinamandla, kubalulekile ukulungelelanisa izinto eziphindaphindiweyo kunye nolwimi olwahlukeneyo kunye nesakhiwo. Ukudibanisa ukwakhiwa kwezivakalisi, uchongo lwamagama, nobude bemihlathi kunokugcina umdla womfundi. Injongo kukusebenzisa obu buchule bamandla, ngaphandle kokubuvumela ukuba bube bubudenge okanye bube nemonotonous.

Imizekelo esebenzayo yophindaphindo

• Kubhalo olucengayo. Ukuphinda ubizo lwesenzo kumanqaku anobuchule kunokomeleza ukuphembelela kwengxoxo.
• Kubhalo oluchazayo. Uphinda-phindo lunokusetyenziswa ukuqinisa umoya othile okanye indawo ethile, ngokuthambileyo kukhumbuze umfundi ngemekobume echaziweyo okanye imo.
• Ekubhaleni kwezemfundo. Ukusebenzisa isigama esikhethekileyo kulo lonke iphepha kunganceda ukugcina ukucaca kunye nokugxila, ngakumbi xa ujongene neengqiqo ezinzima.

Ukusebenzisa uphindaphindo ngokufanelekileyo kubandakanya ulungelelwaniso olucekethekileyo. Ayikokuphindaphinda amagama kuphela kodwa ukwenza oko ngenjongo - ukuqaqambisa, ukwenza isingqisho, okanye ukuphucula ukuhambelana. Ngobuchule obu buchule, unokuwuphakamisa ukubhala kwakho, ukwenze kungabi nolwazi nje kuphela kodwa kukhumbuleke kwaye kubandakanyeke. Khumbula, injongo kukusebenzisa uphindaphindo njengesicwangciso sokucaca kunye nokugxila, kungekhona njengento ebuyela umva ngenxa yokunqongophala kweentlobo ezahlukeneyo okanye ukuyila.

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